Enzo Serge Petelo · 2020 April General Conference · 2020-04-01
Official published text.
No witness list recorded beyond the primary source.
Proofread against the source text.
Light review: in-context proofread, encoding-artifact cleanup, synopsis/session-artifact cleanup, and spacing fixes. NOT a full page-by-page scan collation.
Collated word-by-word against the original scan.
Heavyweight pass found the vault body was a different talk than the one actually published at this URL/title/speaker -- likely a scraper mix-up at ingest time, not a later page edit. Confirmed against a Wayback Machine snapshot from 2020-05-04 (https://web.archive.org/web/20200504200613/https://www.churchofjesuschrist.org/study/general-conference/2020/04/33petelo?lang=eng), captured less than a month after the conference: same title/speaker, same body text and footnotes as the current live page, and the same calling_at_time ('Member of the Meadow Wood Ward, Provo Utah Edgemont Stake') -- so the official text was never the one previously stored here. Replaced the body verbatim from the official page/archive (paragraphs, scripture links, and the two footnotes reconstructed from the live page's <footer class="notes"> block) and corrected calling_at_time and source_archived_url to match. -- flagging this correction specifically since it replaces the prior body wholesale rather than a normal proofread. ADDENDUM (independent follow-up check): an even earlier Wayback snapshot exists from 2020-04-17 (https://web.archive.org/web/20200417045310/https://www.churchofjesuschrist.org/study/general-conference/2020/04/33petelo?lang=eng, 16 days post-conference) -- checked paragraph-by-paragraph against the restored body above (normalizing away markdown link syntax) and it matches verbatim. This corroborates the fix: the official text has been stable since at least 16 days after the conference, and the vault's original scrape was simply wrong from ingest, not a case of the page being edited later.
This is a living critical edition. If you find a transcription, metadata, or sourcing error in this talk, report it to the editors →Reports are collated against the page scan and land as corrections in the vault.