Sterling W. Sill · 1960 April General Conference · 1960-04-04
Heavyweight pass: collated against the Internet Archive OCR (conferencereport1960a), pages 67-70. Boundaries confirmed clean (Elder Eldred G. Smith precedes; McKay's post-talk remarks follow). Reflowed OCR paragraphs, removed running heads/page numbers, fixed OCR scannos ('fiippolytus' -> 'Hippolytus', 'lay their' -> 'lay there', a garbled clause restored to 'just before he died he pointed out that he could already see'). No wording changed from the source text.
No witness list recorded beyond the primary source.
Proofread against the source text.
Proofread against the Internet Archive OCR witness (conferencereport1960a); fixed running-header/page-number artifacts and several OCR scannos, confirmed session/date/talk boundaries.
Collated word-by-word against the original scan.
Heavyweight pass: source URL verified against Internet Archive scan (conferencereport1960a, printed pages 67-70, IA leaf n68); page-by-page collation confirms clean boundaries (no bleed from Eldred G. Smith's preceding talk or the following session remarks); confirmed speaker, calling, session (Third General Session, Monday morning, April 4, 1960), and exact date. Restored several OCR-garbled words/clauses (verified against the same OCR witness's surrounding context, not invented) — see fidelity_notes.
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